I found this paper to mainly be about the way Dr. Seuss affected our literacy as we were children. One argument made was that no matter how good some other children's books may be, they do not teach us nearly as much as Dr. Seuss books did. Even though they were fun and colorful, they all had a deeper meaning to teach us different lessons in each one.
I liked the opening of this paper because it catches your attention. Almost everyone can relate to Dr. Seuss so you are immediately drawn to read the rest of the paper. Another good quality of this project is the twitter page created. It really brings together the mood they are trying to set my incorporating Dr. Seuss. The background provided about his books is good, however there are a few spots with a shaky transition. The survey was a good way to keep your attention. I also like that each member f the group gave their response to the results rather than just putting them there for us to figure out on our own. I would suggest however, that more detail be added to the actual writing portion of the paper.
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