Monday, October 29, 2012

Peer Review











          Do you think the effects of Twitter, Facebook, and other social media impact your writing in any way? How does the fact that you have to condense your thoughts into a certain number of words make your writing better or worse? Our research paper talks about how social media can affect our writing skills by shortening our sentences, making our writing informal, and impacting our spelling in a negative way.  Social networks are taking the place of idle time, like reading and writing; instead of reading a book, people are on Facebook or they are instant messaging.  Our main question is does social media have a negative or positive affect on writing as a whole.
The conversation we are presented with has become a big issue in today’s society.  With the ever growing technology in today’s world, the way students are taught today has made a complete turnaround.  Not only do students have access to many different technologies these days, but they are available to them at a much younger age.  When young children are getting cell phones, smart phones especially, it pushes them into social media.  With the convenience of having it right at their fingertips, they are getting twitters, facebooks, tumblrs, pinterests, etc. at a much younger age than what we are used to.  With this happening, it is just causing students to be turned away from literature as they are more distracted with their social media. 
However, with the growing technology, more and more things are being put online.  With the much easier access, students can be browsing the web on social media sites, but still have a reading pulled on a different tab.  Social media itself can be argued as literature.  We read a heavy amount as we scroll through our facebook and twitter feed.  Therefore, one can argue that even though social media distracts us from the old style of literature, it replaces it with a more efficient way to get our information fast.  In a study conducted in Great Britain in 2010, it is proved that social media is actually helping students literacy.
According to one of the studies, 49 per cent of young people believe that writing is “boring.” However, students who use technology-based texts such as blogs have more positive attitudes toward writing. Whereas 60 per cent of bloggers say that they enjoy writing, only 40 per cent of non-bloggers find writing enjoyable. “
“The study also showed that students who write blogs or maintain a profile on a social networking site tend to be more confident about their writing ability. More than 60 per cent of students who blog and 56 per cent of students who have a profile on a social networking site claim to be “good” or “very good” writers, compared with only 47 per cent of those who don’t use online formats. Having a blog also affects writing behaviour. Students who are active online are significantly more likely to keep a journal or write short stories, letters or song lyrics than those without a social networking presence.“
These statistics show can be schoking to some.  Not everybody likes the way literacy is changing and seeing these stastitics can throw them off because they want to believe that social media is only making writing worse.  As these studies have shown, that is not the case.  If a student is reading and writing all day long on their social media sites, they are being automatically exposed to reading and writing.  Without such sites, who knows if they would even pick up a book because they would be more ditracted by technology such as video games where the student is not being exposed to literature at all. 
In the article, the author discusses the difference between how he wrote when he was a kid and how kids write now.  When he was younger he was writing in a journal to himself; it stayed in his drawer and no one was reading it.  Today, that is so much different.  With the internet and social media, young students are able to write for an audience.  When they start out at a young age writing for an audience, they can become more confident with their writing and it will only continue to improve.
Another study we look at provides us with shocking evidence against a norm of social media on literacy.  It is not uncommon to hear people saying that social media effects how we spell in a bad way.  However, if we take a look at these reults, we can see otherwise.
“In a recent study of  9-10 year olds results show that there was a positive relationship between the use of ‘textisms’ (text speak) and an improvement in spelling and overall literacy skills (Wood 2011).  114 children took part and were tested both before and after the 10 week experiment.  Spelling scores were higher in a majority of students after having use of a mobile phone and using text speak to communicate. “
Although the results are shocking, the more it is thought about, the more it can make sense.  If i young student is on their phone texting, tweeting, and reading what other people are saying, they are exposed to literacy more than we are led to believe.  The more they are exposed to it, the better they will become with it.
This issue has a number of good arguments on both side of the line.  In the end, the way you perceive it(good or bad) is all up to you.  Some are a fan of the ways literacy is being changed so they learn to adapt while others continue to believe in the old ways.
          Our question has multiple answers. There are both positive and negative effects on how social media effects are writing skills. According to a study by both The University of Massachusetts and Boston College computers can help with writing in many ways. Students who use computers for schools related tasks are often more engaged then students who do schoolwork by hand. The simple fact that computers give students automatic feedback helps them to improve their writing skills. When you are writing an assignment by hand you can not see the spelling and grammatical errors you have made, but if you are using a computer you can use software like Microsoft Word to check your mistakes for you. Another study conducted by The University of Massachusetts and Boston College showed that students who use a computer to write on a regular basis have higher standardized text scores than those students who do not use computers to write.
            Although social media may have some positive influence on one’s writing ability, social media also contains negative influence.  Social networking sites like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, Pinterist, and Tumblr are all very interesting, yet distracting; this can take away from idle time like reading and writing.  Instead of reading a book or writing in a journal or diary, people are on Facebook reading statuses or on Twitter expressing their opinions (in 140 characters or less).  Facebook and Twitter are breeding grounds for bad grammar and punctuation.  People are too caught up in what they’re saying to care about spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.  When scrolling down my Twitter timeline, I found these tweets from actual people that prove the fact that proper writing etiquette is not used through social networking sites.  According to Frank Re, “yeah you make me feel like, I’ve been locked out of Heavennnn” (10/18/12 1:47 PM).  Look at all of the errors in his tweet: he failed to capitalize the first letter of this sentence (but he capitalizes “heaven”), he put an unnecessary comma after the word “like”, and spelled “heaven” with four N’s.  Another tweet I found, from Shaela Lewis, states, “Yu don’t hate me u hate how much u love me” (10/18/12, 1:31 PM).  Where to begin with this tweet; she spells the word “you” as “yu” and “u”, and her tweet lacks a comma after the word “me” as well as a period.  Even going through my tweets I found multiple writing errors.  For example, I tweeted, “Anthropology y u so expensive” (10/6/12, 4:08 PM).  This tweet contains multiple spelling and grammar errors, like the word “why” and “you” being spelled as “y” and “u”.  Also, this sentence is missing a verb (“are”) and since I am addressing the store Anthropologie (the store is spelled with an “ie” so technically I spelled the name of the store wrong, too) there should be a comma following that word.  Social networking sites are full of all sorts of writing errors, and writing repeatedly like this can become habit forming and bad for your writing. 
          The topic we have researched on effects of social media on our writing today is very relevant in today’s society.  Many of children, teenager and even adults have been impacted by the outcome of social media on writing skills. The amount of individuals logging onto social media websites is rapidly increasing, therefore making this topic more insightful to many people today. We have found negative effects such as it has made writing more concise. On websites such as Twitter there can only be a certain number of characteristics to write and this causes students to not write full out and get lazy in grammar and punctuation. Further research that could be done on this question to get further conclusions could logging onto students Facebook’s and Twitter’s to actually see what kind of effect these social medias have had on their grammar. Also by researching and taking polls in a certain area we can get a better understanding of how many people this research project is really effecting.
           
           

Monday, October 8, 2012

10-8-12 Homework


This is a good example of contrast because the black figure on a light color attracts your attention immediately.  There is also contrast with the white cord/ipod on the black figure and green background.  I see repetition in the bracelet on the dancers arm.  There is also alignment leading from the dancers hand to the earphones.  The proximity is seen through the iPod and earphones being close to her body.  
We are reading this to show that there are different ways to perceive things.  This can be carried over to our writing because different people may perceive the things we write in different ways.

Friday, October 5, 2012

10-5-12 Homework

Dialetical Journal-From Pencils to Pixels: The Stages of Literacy Technologies (Dennis Baron)

"The computer, the latest development in writing technology, promises, or threatens, to change literacy practices for better or worse, depending on your point of view."
-These days we rely on technology for just about anything.  For some this is a good thing, and for others this is a bad thing.  Like said in this quote, it is all dependent on your point of view.  When writing a paper, you can sit down with a pen and paper or you can sit down at the computer.  Personally, I sit down at the computer, so in my opion technology is changing literacy for the better.  This has a lot to do with the generatrion in which we were raised.  Literacy is in a constant change and we must adapt.

"The computer is also touted as a gateway to literacy."
-With the groewing technology that we are provided with in our everyday lives, it has become easier to access reading and writing through technology.  We no longer have to get ourselves to the library or book store to get a book.  So many books can be found online, causing the computer to be our gateway to literacy.

"Whether it consists of energized particles on a screen or ink embedded in paper or lines gouged into clay tablets, writing itself is always first and foremost a technology, a way of engineering materials in order to accomplish an end."
-Writing is essentially us taking the ideas in our head and creating something.  Through our writing we are acomplishing something, just as technology does.  However, writing came before all of our many technologies we have today.

"While brave new literacy technologies offer new opportunities for producting and manipulating text, they also present new opportunities for fraud."
-All of the technologies we have open us up to a number of opportunites.  However, with everything being put online these days it is easy to find other people's works to copy and paste into your own.  We have the easy answer to writers block at the tips of our fingers so we must learn to work around this.

"The pencil may be old, but like the computer today and the telegraph in 1849, it is an indisputable example of communication technology."
-We always have to start somewhere with technology and it is constantly growing.  Before we had computers, we have a pencil and paper.  Simple as that.

"The development of the pencil is also a paradigm of the development of literacy."
-A pencil is technology, when technology grows, literacy grows.  Technology and literacy work together to develop and grow everyday. 


Wednesday, October 3, 2012

"shitty first draft"

I can still remember learning to write my name in kindergarden.  We would be given a piece of paper and asked to write our name five times.  Little did I know that those days would shape the lazy writer I would become today.  It would go something like this: Elizabeth, Elizabeth, Libby, Libby, Libby.  When asked why I did this I said it was because Elizabeth was too long to write.  When I look at my writing today I realize how lazy I am with it.  If something is too long then I am immediately turned off by it.

10-3-12 Homework

Summary:
The readings are both narratives/autobiographies discussing the authors writings.  We see that there are so many things that shape how we write.  Through these readings we see what it too these writers to get to where they are now.   They share their experience with us in order to help us get to where we think we need to be.

Synthesis:
This works with the other readings because they are all about how we write.  This reading brings it all together by discussing how we become to write the way we do.

QDJ:
1. When she says she wanted to "kill" her self in her writing she meant that she wanted to start over.  By writing about it and getting it all out she is able to get a fresh start.  Writing her autobiography was her way of moving on from the past.

2. Bio-mythography is when your writing is fiction and autobiography.  I think her work is an example of this because how does one remember every detail exactly.  Somewhere in your writing something will be made up.

3. She uses the imagine of a man she knew to frame her autobiography.  She describes a number of things about him in detail and I feel as if I am able to see him.  I would use the images from my early education years for my own.

AEI:
2. I think we can change identity through text because when you write you can do and say whatever you want.  This can especially be achieved through fictional writing.  You can make yourself into a character and then write it however you want.

Personal Reflection:
I liked this reading because it helps bring us to the next project.  It got me thinking about how my writing became what it is.  After reading this I began brainstorming in my head what I would write about for our next paper.





Monday, October 1, 2012

10-1-12 Homework

Dialectical Journal
"Literacy looms as one of the great engines of profit and competitive advantage in the 20th century: a lubricant for consumer desire; a means for integrating corporate markets; a foundation for the deployment of weapons and other technology; a raw material in the mass production of information."
This quote is saying that without literacy we would be missing a key component of life.  The spread of information is very important to our everyday lives be it through books, newspapers, magazines, etc, and without literacy we would not be able to do this.  It is a competitive advantage because literacy is power. 

"Sponsors, as I have come to think of them, are any agents, local or distant, concrete or abstract, who enable, support, teach, model, as well as recruit, regulate, suppress, or withhold literacy-and gain advantage by it in some way."
For how important literacy is these days, it wouldn't be possible without help.  Even though some of us may have taught ourselves to read, someone has helped us read or write at some point in our lives.  Brandt describes sponsors in a fairly broad sense because help can come from anybody and everybody, as well as anywhere and everywhere.